fail, fail again, fail better

i finished a pretty substantial and (hopefully) close to finished draft of my play. i'm going to send it out to friends tomorrow for opinions.

the title is still up in there air but here are some ideas:

1. writing checks others pay (the title on the audition flyer)
2. even while it was happening it wasn't happening
3. conflict, at a low intensity

to be completely honest, im not really thrilled with any of them. i keep hoping ill come across the title randomely, like when reading the back of a box of cereal or something. im sure though that when i come across it, ill know it. either that or i really hope to like one those three titles more and more.